Got some spare time and am not too tired, so I thought I could as well start with the quotes here. I will comment, as usual, on stuff that strikes me as especially well-written, interesting or just "plainly" sparks a lot of ideas in my head. x) And all the while I will be drinking tasty tasty tea (while it is getting close to midnight xP).
That being said, you alright and everything? I fought off all my infections, I guess, and feel kinda good at the moment. Relaxed, I mean, and healthy.
I will start with the quotes now. Let's see...
# 131: Nahahahaha~ I can kinda see Botta at his desk, fighting a war against paperwork and right in the middle of the night. Then Yuan or just some random Renegade bursts into his office, probably completely ragged-looking and rambling something utterly weird. xD It could even lead up to some real drama - if I wasn't in such a silly mood here. xD
# 132: W-What!? *blink* Now THIS sounds unusual. What is going on here? I cannot even make up my mind on whether this is AU or ToS... ToS, maybe...?
# 133: Hmmm, where is he sneaking around and why is he "being unfair" in his nervousness? Is he in an unfamiliar place and tries to trust whomever he is with there or something?`In this case, I would think I set it in an AU place... For... no reason? No, I really dunno.
# 134: Ouch. That is... very powerful. Is he having a flashback? I mean, because of the present tense used in the italic part. And whom is he talking to? For a very odd reason I see Martel, but that cannot really be... I dunno. This one here would be rather ToS than AU, wouldn't it? I do especially like - and am fascinated by - the stark contrast between the italic and the non-italic text. The non-italic text is gloomy, but still very calm, in my opinion. The text in italics... not so much. It is hectic and dirty and then again not even THAT gloomy, rather... noisy. Like something that breaks right over you. I find this very, very cool and catchy. And emotional, of course. (Poor Yuan... ;_;)
# 136: Ehehehehe, what!? xD Botta isn't talking about himself in regards to Yuan, is he? This would be awkward~ Well, in fact it would still be awkward if he was talking about an own ex, especially if it was a guy and Yuan knew him personally and stuff. x´D
# 137: ... What the HECK is going on here!? xD I mean, what are they even DOING? xD Trying to be innocent I kinda imagine Yuan at his desk or something and all blushy, because Botta's mere presence is distracting him from work, since he has not quite figured things out, and then Botta leans over or something... Could happen any time after a passionate kiss out of the blue, maybe. x333
# 139: Hmmm, what could he possibly be trying to "master"? Some kind of self-control thingie? Trying not to flinch from something incoming into his vision? Or something? ö_ö
# 140: Ouch, once again... This strikes me as AU. I dunno.
# 141: Aaaah, Yuan. You is so stupiiid! >_< Stop being a prick. xD I wonder what it is that is being accepted...
# 142: Uuuuh... He DID make this mess out of a good reason, didn't he? Or he wasn't the only one making a mess...? *blink*
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Date: 2012-03-11 10:10 pm (UTC)From:Got some spare time and am not too tired, so I thought I could as well start with the quotes here. I will comment, as usual, on stuff that strikes me as especially well-written, interesting or just "plainly" sparks a lot of ideas in my head. x) And all the while I will be drinking tasty tasty tea (while it is getting close to midnight xP).
That being said, you alright and everything? I fought off all my infections, I guess, and feel kinda good at the moment. Relaxed, I mean, and healthy.
I will start with the quotes now. Let's see...
# 131: Nahahahaha~ I can kinda see Botta at his desk, fighting a war against paperwork and right in the middle of the night. Then Yuan or just some random Renegade bursts into his office, probably completely ragged-looking and rambling something utterly weird. xD It could even lead up to some real drama - if I wasn't in such a silly mood here. xD
# 132: W-What!? *blink* Now THIS sounds unusual. What is going on here? I cannot even make up my mind on whether this is AU or ToS... ToS, maybe...?
# 133: Hmmm, where is he sneaking around and why is he "being unfair" in his nervousness? Is he in an unfamiliar place and tries to trust whomever he is with there or something?`In this case, I would think I set it in an AU place... For... no reason? No, I really dunno.
# 134: Ouch. That is... very powerful. Is he having a flashback? I mean, because of the present tense used in the italic part. And whom is he talking to? For a very odd reason I see Martel, but that cannot really be... I dunno. This one here would be rather ToS than AU, wouldn't it? I do especially like - and am fascinated by - the stark contrast between the italic and the non-italic text. The non-italic text is gloomy, but still very calm, in my opinion. The text in italics... not so much. It is hectic and dirty and then again not even THAT gloomy, rather... noisy. Like something that breaks right over you. I find this very, very cool and catchy. And emotional, of course. (Poor Yuan... ;_;)
# 136: Ehehehehe, what!? xD Botta isn't talking about himself in regards to Yuan, is he? This would be awkward~ Well, in fact it would still be awkward if he was talking about an own ex, especially if it was a guy and Yuan knew him personally and stuff. x´D
# 137: ... What the HECK is going on here!? xD I mean, what are they even DOING? xD Trying to be innocent I kinda imagine Yuan at his desk or something and all blushy, because Botta's mere presence is distracting him from work, since he has not quite figured things out, and then Botta leans over or something... Could happen any time after a passionate kiss out of the blue, maybe. x333
# 139: Hmmm, what could he possibly be trying to "master"? Some kind of self-control thingie? Trying not to flinch from something incoming into his vision? Or something? ö_ö
# 140: Ouch, once again... This strikes me as AU. I dunno.
# 141: Aaaah, Yuan. You is so stupiiid! >_< Stop being a prick. xD I wonder what it is that is being accepted...
# 142: Uuuuh... He DID make this mess out of a good reason, didn't he? Or he wasn't the only one making a mess...? *blink*