Oh, I've constantly been checking your LJ and now that I forgot for a few days you suddenly do? xD
I don't know whether I can really help you in this (and it's already pretty late ^^"), but I could try and comment some of the Symphonia ones and what comes into my mind when reading them...? Is this what you want?
So... Let's start with Symphonia No.3, which kinda had the strongest emotional impact on me so far...
It makes me feel really cold on the inside to read it and I can imagine it is set in a more modern AU setting. For some reason I see them both at night in some appartment, Botta pulling the shutters away to gaze outside or something. I don't know, it could be completely different than what you have in mind, but still... Anyway, it is a very sad snippet and I think I better move on or I am going to cry. I'm not exactly a type for knowing about the death of a close person beforehand and long goodbyes or something. ^^" Oh, but I find that short piece of dialogue VERY well chosen and written. Especially Botta's short answer is like... wow. Perfect.
Symphonia No. 1 sounds very interesting - and PRETTY funny. x´D What the hell has Botta done that day and whom did he try to mess with? ô.o It could be an interesting story about... I don't know, maybe I'm weird, but... Botta discovering a more... careless side about himself and slowly slipping towards it? Like him losing his spirit a little, being exhausted. I don't know whether this just comes from the late hour. xD
Symphonia No.6... Oh god, what is happening? O_O You know, this could even be the beginning of a story, followed by some "How we got here..." stuff. You know what I mean?
Symphonia No.8: Am I seeing things or could they... be hugging or something? Or at least something like that?
Symphonia No.9: NIIIIOUUUUU! O_O
Symphonia No.12: You're writing pretty violent stories lately, aren't you? xD I don't really know what could have happened, maybe something fell onto him...? Anyway, it's pretty catchy written and kind of fits my inspirational mood at the moment. Was there a fight? It could be a very good scene after the dust settled a little or something...
Symphonia No.15: Okaiiiiiiiiiiii.......? ô.o Now what could have happened? Is this from Osmosis or something like this and they got into a real bad fight or something? I'm not sure what to think about it, it certainly gets your thoughts running. ö.ö
And finally Symphonia No.18: Kratos identifying Yuan's body or something...? :(
... I don't know whether I did what you wanted me to. ^^" I just thought I'd say something about the thoughts that came into my mind.
Let's see whether I can get myself together and write something as well soon. I'm kinda... hyper-inspired. o.O Must have been this amazing game I played, 999: 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors... It REALLY gets you into a nauseaus writing mood, at least it did me. o.O
Hope my comment was of some help to you or something...?
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I don't know whether I can really help you in this (and it's already pretty late ^^"), but I could try and comment some of the Symphonia ones and what comes into my mind when reading them...? Is this what you want?
So... Let's start with Symphonia No.3, which kinda had the strongest emotional impact on me so far...
It makes me feel really cold on the inside to read it and I can imagine it is set in a more modern AU setting. For some reason I see them both at night in some appartment, Botta pulling the shutters away to gaze outside or something. I don't know, it could be completely different than what you have in mind, but still... Anyway, it is a very sad snippet and I think I better move on or I am going to cry. I'm not exactly a type for knowing about the death of a close person beforehand and long goodbyes or something. ^^" Oh, but I find that short piece of dialogue VERY well chosen and written. Especially Botta's short answer is like... wow. Perfect.
Symphonia No. 1 sounds very interesting - and PRETTY funny. x´D What the hell has Botta done that day and whom did he try to mess with? ô.o It could be an interesting story about... I don't know, maybe I'm weird, but... Botta discovering a more... careless side about himself and slowly slipping towards it? Like him losing his spirit a little, being exhausted. I don't know whether this just comes from the late hour. xD
Symphonia No.6... Oh god, what is happening? O_O You know, this could even be the beginning of a story, followed by some "How we got here..." stuff. You know what I mean?
Symphonia No.8: Am I seeing things or could they... be hugging or something? Or at least something like that?
Symphonia No.9: NIIIIOUUUUU! O_O
Symphonia No.12: You're writing pretty violent stories lately, aren't you? xD I don't really know what could have happened, maybe something fell onto him...? Anyway, it's pretty catchy written and kind of fits my inspirational mood at the moment. Was there a fight? It could be a very good scene after the dust settled a little or something...
Symphonia No.15: Okaiiiiiiiiiiii.......? ô.o Now what could have happened? Is this from Osmosis or something like this and they got into a real bad fight or something? I'm not sure what to think about it, it certainly gets your thoughts running. ö.ö
And finally Symphonia No.18: Kratos identifying Yuan's body or something...? :(
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I don't know whether I did what you wanted me to. ^^" I just thought I'd say something about the thoughts that came into my mind.
Let's see whether I can get myself together and write something as well soon. I'm kinda... hyper-inspired. o.O Must have been this amazing game I played, 999: 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors... It REALLY gets you into a nauseaus writing mood, at least it did me. o.O
Hope my comment was of some help to you or something...?